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05/14/10 @ 04:30
Comment from: David Rex-Taylor [Visitor] Email
The 65th anniversary of 2WW reminds me of this Petersburg memorial: Please advise if my translatiion is OK. [UK fan]

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At the will of the tyrants, nations were tearing each other to pieces. You rose up, Workers' Petersburg, and best started the war of all the oppressed against all our oppressors, in order to destroy the very seed of war.

Don responds: Not bad. To capture the flow of the sentences, I'm tempted to add a couple of functional and explicatory words like “when” and “city of” and slightly reprhases it:

When nations were tearing each other apart at the will of tyrants, you, Petersburg, city of the Working Man, were the first to rise up to wage the war of the oppressed against all oppressors so that the very seed of war could be destroyed.

05/15/10 @ 05:31
Comment from: Edgar [Visitor]
Good work on the translation! Flowery, high-fallutin Russian like that on monuments, etc. is in a class of its own.
05/17/10 @ 10:50

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